punchlines trying to make extended ones..like 4 bars each

When his mom told him to reach for the stars
he threw out thoughts of bitches, money and cars
Sat down, took out a joint and shot right to mars.
he decided to go out and try a shot at a bar,
went out and got himself shot at a bar
and with my final breath i spit a final bar
and let everyone see my deep emotional scars.

When i die bury me butt naked and face down in the grass, so i can fuck the world while yall kiss my ass

(insert name here)

.....

Since born in my mama's vaginal sauna
As a sono-gram, I've been fond of phonics
It's ironic, even as an embryonic
Fed through an umbilical
don't that sound biblical?
I've been a terror
Since I teareth out of the u-terus
Because evil plans were made to defeat us
As a fetus
Though now I walk in infamy
As a child they had it in for me
Was raised with guns in infantry
In diapers and in infancy
The childhood of a hood
that was raised in the hood
Cops said "put your hands in the hot sky"
I put my hands down on the hot hood
I can't whine or drink wine
Nine planets planned it
'Til it became apparent
My parents shouldn't have been a parent
State to state we ran some
I wasn't worth no ransom
Money, won't you hand some?
A ***** wasn't handsome
Raise the mind like Charles Manson's
New I was some man's son
But which one?
That made me strong
created my poison tongue..

Rapping is my life..something i cant live without... few people think the same way...to those that do, holla back

Im worried `bout the cars, the jewels, the watch and da bitches....first get the cars and the jewels, then get watched by the bitches...if you go for the ritches, no optional figgas so how do you niggas think you can come mess wit me in ma birthplace, where all my money lie? i dont know but im not aboutta tella lie, hop off my dick, cus im getting tired, gettin hired, Badboy? i dont know man, the truth is gettin clearer, im getting nearer, to discovering something mighty true....stay true to the cola you live by, holla atcha nigga

some ideas for a jeezy put on freestyle, not in order or put together at all, tell me what you think about each bar

Live my life in Bk, know that im not jus all day, i keep hustlin on ma block, are you ready for the double glock? if not run away ill kill you the cally way, bucc fifty on ya face, ready for da race, knowin you guna lose but not being able, to finally choose, ya futures in ma hands so make sure that you aint hatin, lookin at all the ice i got, ye man i might be skatin, burnin this city on fire, justy like an arsonist, blood filling your whole esophogus.

a new freestyle, new update

ima join da BKa and by the way, who said crime doesent pay? got the papa in my pockets, got daflow lika rocket hedin straight into da sky, no lie, i can change da weatha, its wuteva, when i say im comin in stormin it aint the clouds, its gonna be me, if u were a slave, i would be free, dont argue wit a G its simple a bad idea, and if you do, you jus gunna feal F E A R so i suggest you go and hide if you dont, ill throw you in da trunk n take you for a ride, make it so the cops cant find ya body, when you learn karate you might be safe but only from ma rocks, not from ma glocks, or the fact, that the niggas on ma block will put some coins in a sock and beat the fuck outchu, thats all i gotta spit to let u know im legit but ill get some new ideas soon, you needa get sum poon-tang get some action while leavin you in tyraction is ma idea of fun, so im outa nikka and you're shit is done.

Ma Best written eva, normally im shit attem, comment yall..

alright...alright...that was sick but you gotta learn how to rhyme... regardless my rhymes will put you in the NEW YORK TIMES
I come with power to “defeat”, you gon need a MIC 2 STOP IT
I’ll probably stomp on you unintentionally cuz you MI-CRO-SCOPIC

Your “Rhymes a Joke” lemme guess, you couldn’t “find the scope”?
I’ll have you left just like your rhymes, cause your Rhymes is Broke
Imma Design your face just like a Kaleidoscope
If you anger me, my daggers gonna COLLIDE-with ya-THROAT
You act famous, maybe on your corner where you BUY~the~DOPE
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a MICROSCOPE
Sorry Kid, I really wish I could say I~SEE~YOU
But only time I do is when you in the I.C.U
When It comes 2 Rhymin I don’t care Christain, Catholic, Or Anglican
I’ll have u stunned so bad you’ll stand just like a MANICAN
I’m so hott, yet so cold, im like Jesus was
Only time u coulnd’t feel me’s under ANESTHESIA
SO baiscally I don' understand why u wanna b facing me
Im worth about 10 times more then your ACV
So tell me is it really me that your tryna battle?
10 cents your ACV, which is your ACTUAL CASH VALUE
I come in “storming”, “Whore, this” is Me, Im like a GLOBAL WARMING
SO Beware nikka, cause this IS your ONLY~WARNING